OMG SHUT UP- responce

I thought that Koehler had a really interesting topic for her argument; it was definitely very original and something that all teenagers can relate to. I would agree with her argument too. When ever i edit other student's papers, I see them use grammar that they would use in a text message in their formal paper. For example saying "thru" instead of "through." While her topic had a lot of potential, I don't think she did a great job supporting her argument. She seemed to support her argument through her own ideas instead of real critical support. Understandably, there isn't much information and research that has been done on this topic, but she should've chosen a more well-researched topic for her paper.