OMG Shut Up - Response

I liked how Koehler began her argument with a famous quote. It did a good job of transitioning into her claim by grabbing the reader's attention. However as far as forming a persuasive argument, I think her sources could have been more reputable as well as more supportive of her theory or claim. I thought her mini-survey was a good idea but only asking a few friends wasn't really conclusive. She would have needed a much larger cross-sample. Overall, I was not entirely persuaded by Koehler's writing but given the lack of concrete data, I believe she has a good theory.